Who is the page written for?
The page is written for families and students who want to apply
who it should be written for?
the page is written for the right people and it emphasizes how the community enhances students and families. It talks about how the highlander community helps students get a proper education.
can the text on the page be said differently?
Yes it definetly can. The information is very vague and doesn’t really specify what they do to enhance a students education. The page is also bery short and it doesnt’t elaborate on the school’s community partners and how they contribute to highlander.
How I would rewrite the page?
Highlander’s education program brings its mission to life by using innovative, equity-driven teaching to help every child reach their full potential.
Teachers partner with students and families to design personalized learning plans that meet individual goals and needs.
Students and staff collaborate with local organizations and service programs to enhance learning, support families, and strengthen Rhode Island communities.
